All Comments on 'A Creative Challenge Ch. 17'

Clearly it's more than just a fun romp, it's now starting to be a relationship that needs to be defined, and the tension that arises in this chapter only makes us wonder what will happen next.

This continues to be a great story--sexy, beautifully written, and interesting. I love each installment as it appears.

Thanks for your work!

ohio

Reading, for the first time. I have to go to sleep now because i have a busy day tomorrow but i convinced myself that i can read just one more, and then i get something that makes my heart hurt. In a good way, its throat tightening and heart clenching. It's realistic. =]

I think I last commented at Chapter 6 or 7 or 8. This sory is absolutly super. Yes, absolutly super. There is so much crap on Literotica. I will comment again when I've read some more.