by Selena_Kitt
These lines are really nice:
I am the shimmy and sway
of the white birch leaves
burning in the fall
So many great images throughout this short poem. Well done! Now I'm off to read your other work.
Tess
Pleasant enough.
I agree with Eve, the best lines are:
I am the shimmy and sway
of the white birch leaves
burning in the fall,
I think some of the other images are not new and fresh enough to raise the poem up. But your writing is consistently interesting, and I have a feeling there is much better poetry than this in you.
Your Poem was mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews" for Saturday 14, 2006
thanks for the journey
Art~
... that your poetry would speak to me.
I need to read more. ~ Imp