All Comments on 'Spirit Body'

by Selena_Kitt

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 18 years ago
good poem

These lines are really nice:

I am the shimmy and sway

of the white birch leaves

burning in the fall

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good, yes

So many great images throughout this short poem. Well done! Now I'm off to read your other work.

Tess

TheRainManTheRainManabout 18 years ago
Nice read.

Pleasant enough.

I agree with Eve, the best lines are:

I am the shimmy and sway

of the white birch leaves

burning in the fall,

I think some of the other images are not new and fresh enough to raise the poem up. But your writing is consistently interesting, and I have a feeling there is much better poetry than this in you.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews" for Saturday 14, 2006

thanks for the journey

Art~

Alessia BrioAlessia Brioabout 17 years ago
I'm not surprised

... that your poetry would speak to me.

I need to read more. ~ Imp

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