Like this new style
Your word command shows;
My only suggestion would change
Mother Earth to Gaia
(even that change seems a bit lame).
Okay, so I'm a bit jealous ~
The two I'm working on won't let me go
And they refuse to get into shape - a poet's lament...
I like it. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I am uncertain if this is you or mother earth? but...nice write
Doesn't matter if it is you or mother earth, either way it is a strong poem.
Bold and vivid imagery. It screams pain.
in moments of time. TK U MLJ LV NV
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