All Comments on 'A Lonely Girl'

This is the first time I have read your work...and I absolutely loved it! Its rythmical pattern and easy flow did not feel pushed or stretched and unlike some others I have read your use of rhyme and stanza did not cause the wording to be clumsy or make it lose its focus or flow in anyway...

Overall it was wonderful and very true to life! :)

the comment below, very nice rhythm and cadence. nice poem to read.

An easy read,

Repetition's not excessive

Rhyme is not forced;

Again, well done.

. . . lucky guy!

Damn you, I'm going to have to read all your poems now.

You've quite some talent. :-D