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by Anonymous

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by cward201/15/06

sad

quite a sad but lovely poem

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by My Erotic Trail01/15/06

oh vienna

a very touching write! Nobody do it like the blue...pillars of seventh heaven

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by Bill Dada01/15/06

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I like 'euphuistic jive.'

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by lobomao01/15/06

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oh to be there again
eons Egon ago
seeing sights of Scheile
and taking in new tastes
whistful fistfuls of experience
then on to Prague to
drink in a steaming Mucha
ah me oh my
the places you'll go...

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by LeBroz01/16/06

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There you go again, making me work, "euphuistic jive" indeed! Finally found euphuism in the dictionary (and the Google search helped too). Especially liked those last two lines.

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U01/16/06

good...

first of yours that i have read,
very intersting and poignant.
lovely...

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by f-cynyr01/22/06

nice use

of cliche's. you got your point across.

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