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yuukk
That is among the slimiest rape and betrayal stories I ever have had the misfortune to read. It would have been superior if the poor young lady had done a 'snowball' transfer of the parasite back to Jason and taken HIM over. THAT would have been gratifying.
Awful
I agree the parasite should have made her stronger not weakened her will
Good work
This is a good bit of mind control and I really like the sci-fi in this. Great storyline. Work on this with an volunteer editor and expand.
nice
was a good read I liked the story line.
Oh lighten up!!
I don't think this piece was entirely without it's redeeming aspects. I'm not much for the sci-fi angle but was pleasantly surprised to be drawn in somewhat. Also liked the angle of how the creature manipulated her pleasure centres to reward and punish...would have preferred pain to nausea. A nice effort, :-)
Good Combination
This story is a good combination of the mind control fetish and science fiction. It's very well written and gives a clear picture of the mind set of both the victim and her abuser. The critics who didn't like the story need to realize if the category is "mind control" that, in most cases, the victim is likely to be a woman. If that offends them, don't read the story.
Sequel
let's see a sequel. it was an excellent first attempt
You critics are lame.
This story is one of the better ones I've read on Literotica in the Mind Control section. It's got a nice blend of sci-fi in it, and it's a neat concept. The person who mentioned the snow-ball effect, get a fucking grip. This story was designed for the purpose of drawing you in to understand how it works - if the thing is latched to her mind, how can she fight it and snowball it into him? It's the parasite's will and desire to help the main character of the story. If you don't like this story, you really shouldn't be in this section. Bravo.
Bueno
This is a great story. Honestly. It combines several elements that you don't often see here at literotica. Most of the "mind control" stories here amount to "women become better off by way of 'mind control' " or "sadistic psycho turns women into mindless sex robots".
At least 60% of the joy from a mind control story, is the exercise of CONTROL. A mindless sex toy has no mind to control, and liberating a woman from an abusive husband, or getting revenge on a previous lover by eradicating her mind, fall somewhat short of the stated goal.
In this story, however, the subject actually puts up a modicum of resistance to the control. And that's where the real meat of the fantasy lies, doesn't it? It's not the control that powers the fantasy, it's the resistance.
Just like it's not the thrust that provides the pleasure, it's the friction. If we got the pleasure from the thrusting, then men would be thrusting away at the grand canyon for all they cared, or reading the other lukewarm entries in this category for that matter.
Hope chapter 2 redeems this
otherwise (as previous commentators have pointed out) it's just a nasty rape and not in the slightest erotic.
The Sci Fi was ok
Unfortunately, this (like most mind-control stories) has the woman as the victim. I'd prefer more stories where the victim was male, but can still appreciate these stories for the sci-fi aspects, even if it doesn't get me hot. At least the victim struggled in this one.
The main thing lacking in this story is it doesn't give a proper explanation of why the parasites serve that man.
Awesome
best mind control story ever
still the best Literotica Mind Control story (to my knowledge)
I read this years ago. It sickened me then, it sickens me now, and it was and is very very hot. And neatly written. I've seen a few other very good Mind Control stories on this site, but I think this one is the best.
Details
Lack of details when describing the actions of sex. Grinding yes but don't feel bad about going into details.
Great work!
The method of controll is kinda creepy, but I love the rest of this story. I like how you really get both persons perspective. It is also interesting to see how the guy reacts after finnaly capturing Katrina. It is like the last book in a good book seires, you are glad you got it, but sad that it's over.
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