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Very nice and hot
I liked this story very much but it was too short. It's great to read a hot story that also has the correct spelling and grammar.
Sensual and inviting story
The story was well told and was very easy to read...no spelling/gramatical errors. That alone made the story flow. The other side of the coin is that it was very sensually put together and that was the final and best angle to how it was put forth. I gave it an extremely high mark because I liked it so much.
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Interesting characters
A well written vignette that I hated to see end. There are so many other possibilities open to these two. I hope you'll think about bringing them back one day.
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