All Comments on 'We hold the power'

Damn, you're getting good! So good you've put me into editor mode. The build up seems a bit too long; I was wondering, where are we going with this. But it's good enough to keep my attention. I like what you say but it could be tightened up a bit. Tell you what I'll do - first, I'll get a good night's sleep, then I'll send you suggestions for your consideration later this afternoon. A quick look and I was thinking those first 3 stanzas could be combined, then there are a few points that could be cut here and there; I'll play with it and get back to you later.

Power that can be used for good or bad, or seen with the same differences. Nice job.

DC:

It says all that needs to be said about the written word. Thank You. Ronnie W.

You might consider changing one or two of the 'Yet's.

You are growing, and (IMHO) improving.

is in your words...nice poem