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Sweet
Thank you for your story...please continue to write,can't wait for part 2.....waiting in Va..
Just So You Know...
"redhead" is ONE word, not two, as you have in your profile. Therefore, a simple suggestion is in order: leave writing to (at least) semi-educated people, which obviously omits you.
Where's Part II
Sweet,
I loved your story! Ignore the idiot from the last entry...you ARE educated - your story was good stuff. Anyone of a writing education knows the rules of grammar don't apply..hence the word "creative". But again, only the educated would know this. Keep writing. I can't wait to read your next story.
Just so you know ...
Any writer welcomes a constructive critic but one who is both "anony-mouse" and plain rude, should always be ignored. Please carry on writing and who cares about "good english" - that's what an editor is for. Thanks for your story, ignore the "gentleman". I enjoyed it!
Good tasteful work
This was a well written story, leaving the door open for more adventures. Suzie is obviously a very sensual and gifted writer.
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