All Comments on 'On 3rd and Jasmine Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved It!

We definitely need the next 30 or 40 chapters soon! Please write more.

bottomonebottomoneover 15 years ago
Variety

Loved the cafe scene. Really all the story needs is more chapters. I wondered about his need to be fucked in the ass. Wish you had developed that a bit, it sprang into the story without any foundation. I wanted to know more. No complaint, just my personal preference.

SissyboyManSlaveSissyboyManSlaveabout 12 years ago

Can't wait for chapter 3!

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