All Comments on 'Witness Protection Ch. 01'

i thought this was a great start to a fantastic story, please keep on writing!!!

I can hardly wait to see where you go with this. It's a great begining!

You now have me hooked, I will be watching for the continuation of the story. It was well written and quite enjoyable, I am waiting.......

Wonderful build up to what? Hopefully you will continue the saga. It is nice to see a tale with out careless grammar or spelling errors.

come on give us the rest of the story

I'd love to read the rest of this story. You have the makings of something great here...keep going please.

Interesting beginning, and although a short opening chapter, it appears that this story has potential. One thing, though: I seriously doubt that many police officers watch cop shows. Not because they need to "get away from the job", but because they know enough to see the fallacies in the scripting. (Doctors don't watch doctor shows, soldiers don't watch military shows, etc, etc.) Anyway, good beginning!

Thanks for the tip, LoneStar, I see what you mean! :)