All Comments on 'Eating the Peach'

by Sapphos Sister

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 18 years ago
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still fucking with the fruit again?

well, what the hell, you're good.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 18 years ago
;)

Never new fruit could be soooo sexual! LOL

GOOD!

~LB~

f-cynyrf-cynyrabout 18 years ago
i just loved this

so sensual and erotic. well written and images that were so seductive. beautiful poem

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Sensual eroticism at its best;

Okay, maybe I overdid it just a bit

But not by much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very fruity

Loved it. Very sexy.

Sassy SusanSassy Susanover 17 years ago
never again

I will never look at a peach the same way again. It will forever have an aphrodisiac dimension for me. And you, in my mind, will have that sweet, sticky taste. Thank you, I think.

Susan

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Peachy Keen

Another delicious poem.

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 14 years ago
You have no idea

how wet your poetry makes me. I try and copy this style, of love the beauty and simplicity. Gawd, a peach!

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