All Comments on 'Hope's Ray'

the brightness and promise of a new day...very well captured! :)

I'm sorry, from cliché to shining cliché

some shine with hope with a witty write while others gloom. <grin I am not sorry~ excellent poetry~

A light write of light

Lightening life's load.

(Bad, isn't it? Try saying it 3 times fast)

fun! =D and a little longer than the writer's block one... lol. are they goign to slowly grow as each one comes out?

seirously though, i like it a lot, i've always felt that way about light, chasing away gloom... you just put it so well it was almost as though i could actually see it happening!

*HUGS*

Ray today, gone tomorrow.