by RedHairedandFriendly
Now that's what a call
A purrfectly happy pussy
On the back relaxed
Purrfectly grinning.
This is cute and funny. I really enjoyed the poem.
I do believe some of the words could be reworded differently or better said, switched around in areas. I'm not one for fragments, but I still was able to understand, and get a nice chuckle. I love your sense of humor!
One example:
Oh to be Frisbee,
what a delight!
I'd sit on my ass
and take in all the sights.
Maybe:
To be a Frisbee
would be such a delight.
I'd sit on my ass,
and take in all the sights.
Very cute. Put a smile on my face, Red. THough, you always seem too. ;)
Very well written Red, such humour yet so damned accurate for my cats too...
This clever poem takes a look at the life of a cat. The poet points to the advantages ~ the bliss ~ and reckons life as a cat wouldn't be all that bad.
Much too adorable....! Cheater! :-). Putting a cute kitty in there is just too much. Gotta rate it now. Rotten stinking...guh! Wish I had thought of it. Let it be a lesson to all who read this comment...
Never underestimate the power of cuteness!
Sincerely,
Payenbrant.