All Comments on 'Purrfectly Perfect'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Now that's what a call

A purrfectly happy pussy

On the back relaxed

Purrfectly grinning.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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This is cute and funny. I really enjoyed the poem.

I do believe some of the words could be reworded differently or better said, switched around in areas. I'm not one for fragments, but I still was able to understand, and get a nice chuckle. I love your sense of humor!

One example:

Oh to be Frisbee,

what a delight!

I'd sit on my ass

and take in all the sights.

Maybe:

To be a Frisbee

would be such a delight.

I'd sit on my ass,

and take in all the sights.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Just one's opinon

Very cute. Put a smile on my face, Red. THough, you always seem too. ;)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
perfect

how did I miss this <grin...I loved it..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
You made my day

DC:

One cute and humorous poem. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
love it

Very well written Red, such humour yet so damned accurate for my cats too...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
cat dreams.

This clever poem takes a look at the life of a cat. The poet points to the advantages ~ the bliss ~ and reckons life as a cat wouldn't be all that bad.

ScribblerosScribblerosover 16 years ago
Neat

Neat poem, Red.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
WOULD A PUSSY CHASE A FRISBEE

or run in the park. TK U MLJ LV NV

payenbrantpayenbrantalmost 9 years ago
okay...that's cheating!

Much too adorable....! Cheater! :-). Putting a cute kitty in there is just too much. Gotta rate it now. Rotten stinking...guh! Wish I had thought of it. Let it be a lesson to all who read this comment...

Never underestimate the power of cuteness!

Sincerely,

Payenbrant.

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