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Unusual
A valentines haiku of love!
Wonderfully different
Particularly liked 8 and 9. 15... so true. A totally different contest entry, Og. I liked it.
It amazes me to see
these short stories and how you can take fifty words and make them into something that tells a complete tale and do it so well and often. I always look forward to reading these.
Love these!
I just love these! Short, sweet reminders... they've become a tradition, now... I look forward to them. Oh, and I never liked coffee that much, anyway... :)
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Very creative little tales! Excellent job, Og.
Clever approach
I like how they interwove -- and how powerful just a few words, strung together in the right way, can be. ~Imp
Only semi-brilliant
Well, actually, it's a brilliant compilation, but I didn't want you to get the big-head.
Rumple
Great compilation
Og.. what more can be said... brilliance... and always fresh aproaches....
Interesting,
and insightful. I see you like your coffee the same as I like mine.
Original
Very good, I liked it...and the Uzbekistanian judge scores 5.0
great!
how do you come up with so many ideas for so many stories, that despite being short each are complete?
Profound
Og, every single time I read a story of yours, you amaze me with your talent. What's more, you make it all look so easy. Good luck.
Sorry, Og ...
I'm afraid you will have to write one of these for every contest from now on. You created a new tradition with your tiny stories. They somehow remind me of the miniature paintings of old. They may look small, but they convey a whole world.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
wonderful little gems......
like polished colorful rocks, enjoyable to "touch".
So sweet...
I adored your mini holiday stories and looked forward to reading these as well. I was not disappointed in them at all. Fabulous job! Good luck in the contest. :)
Triumph
Another triumph of short powerfull scenes for the season. Well done as always Og
Hugo
Fun, clever, a joy for the reader
These are like a kind of sexy haiku. Write more!
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