What could have been a great story has turned into crap!! The chapters are way to short.
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Anonymous12/19/07
shit
it should have been kept to the kids only you ruined it by getting the parents and relatives involved this does not belong in the incest catagory it belongs in the group sex catagory or the trash
by
Anonymous01/17/08
Loved It From Ga.
Loved it from the start and wished I had a sister that hot!!
This was a wonderful story of family love. Your ending nearly brought me to tears. Thank you!
by
Anonymous06/11/08
gret story
I loved it just wish you had inserted a section on Amy taking brother ass. It choked me up at the end. But wonder if their was some cryptic meaning with Amy' talking to dad going out and not Rob but the problem is when you outlive all your love ones you sometimes have way to much time on your hands to think and pick apart memories both good and bad. Great job maybe one day you might revisit seris I hope and fill in the areas you alluded to like the kids how many did they get into scene Amy and strapon play and lastly I take it Rob n Amy never married.
IF AMY DIES IN '98 AT 91 YEARS OLD WHEN DID THE STORY TAKE PLACE?
DID AMY AND ROB EVEN GET TOGETHER DURING THE BACKYARD PARTY?
I WAS DISAPPOINTED. THE FIRST THREE CHAPTERS WERE WONDERFUL BUT, FOR ME, IT WENT ALL DOWNHILL IN CHAPTER 4. MAYBE YOU COULD DO A RE-WRITE AND STICK TO THE AMY AND ROB, MORE...PLEASE
SANDY
I was not prepared for the last sentence.... what a great series. I wish they were longer reads.... but i loved them all.... great suspense and great twists and turns.... thanks for the build ups.....
This story started out so well, almost like someone else had written the 1 chapter. Insert (pun intended) some 2 bit hack that couldn't write for his/her life. But tried it anyway and this is the shit that came out of it.
English
SHORT!!!!!!!! and Crappy
What could have been a great story has turned into crap!! The chapters are way to short.
shit
it should have been kept to the kids only you ruined it by getting the parents and relatives involved this does not belong in the incest catagory it belongs in the group sex catagory or the trash
Loved It From Ga.
Loved it from the start and wished I had a sister that hot!!
Wonderful
This was a wonderful story of family love. Your ending nearly brought me to tears. Thank you!
gret story
I loved it just wish you had inserted a section on Amy taking brother ass. It choked me up at the end. But wonder if their was some cryptic meaning with Amy' talking to dad going out and not Rob but the problem is when you outlive all your love ones you sometimes have way to much time on your hands to think and pick apart memories both good and bad. Great job maybe one day you might revisit seris I hope and fill in the areas you alluded to like the kids how many did they get into scene Amy and strapon play and lastly I take it Rob n Amy never married.
I'M CONFUSED
IF AMY DIES IN '98 AT 91 YEARS OLD WHEN DID THE STORY TAKE PLACE?
DID AMY AND ROB EVEN GET TOGETHER DURING THE BACKYARD PARTY?
I WAS DISAPPOINTED. THE FIRST THREE CHAPTERS WERE WONDERFUL BUT, FOR ME, IT WENT ALL DOWNHILL IN CHAPTER 4. MAYBE YOU COULD DO A RE-WRITE AND STICK TO THE AMY AND ROB, MORE...PLEASE
SANDY
omg
I was not prepared for the last sentence.... what a great series. I wish they were longer reads.... but i loved them all.... great suspense and great twists and turns.... thanks for the build ups.....
What started out well turned in to pure garbage
This story started out so well, almost like someone else had written the 1 chapter. Insert (pun intended) some 2 bit hack that couldn't write for his/her life. But tried it anyway and this is the shit that came out of it.
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