All Comments on 'A Creative Challenge Ch. 21'

What a pleasant treat this story has been. Not so much because of the erotica (which is fine, thought the lesbian scenes don't work for me), but because your writing is so thoughtful, clear, and intelligent. Take the phrase, "He pronounced every part of the word 'com-for-tab-le' in that uniquely West Indian way, as if each syllable was a separate word that deserved the time to be appreciated on its own" - I could almost hear the Jamaican patois and the deep, smooth male voice it came from.

Delightful.

Thank you.