Tom's Wife, Joe's Slut Ch. 02

Sorry Excuse 4 a Man

Surprising that you have this turned on. There is no consequence here for hubbie just as you planned - he knew and still put up with it for a while - why did you have him do that the poor little bastard - gee you humiliated him - some surprise!

Go Away litle sick 1

hell if it was me

i would divorce the whole family ...id make sure that brother dear knew that if i ever got the chance id put his ass in prison ...id plant dope in his house and call the cops ...let him explain that to them and figure out how to get past drug charges...maybe in prison he could still fuck some ass it would just be a little hairier...wifey hell sell her ass yourself and make money with your clients...then buy some good pussy

Sorry excuse??

Joe is the sorry excuse for a man. Some sort of animal maybe.
Gotta get rid of her. She can't be happy with him, now.

Both are sorry excuses

Tom and his "wife" are both wimps and sorry excuses of married people. irst of all it was not Tom's place to defend his wife against his family. If she was so pissed at the way Joe talked to her then she should have slapped the hell outa him. Then if Joe had tried to hit her back Tom would have been in the right to beat the shit outa his brother. IF HE COULD. He is such a woosey he probably couldnb't beat his way outa wet bag.

They had been married eight yoears and no kids. You ppushed it beyond the realm of belivability by not mentioning that perhaps she couldn't have children. At any rate you tailored your "married couple to fit your story..Shame on you. A good story teller tells a believable story which your's wasn't.

Ok

ok so far Bob, I know you can pull this one out. If you want to just don't make Tom the wimp ....

Too bad there is no one...

to like in this story. Joe is a savage who brutalizes his own family. Shelly and Karen are sluts -whores want to get paid for screwing, Tom allows his brother to rape his wife and then gets angry about the consequences. The rest of the family makes Joe look like a gentlemen. I can truly say that I do not care about anyone in this story.

If Karen had an ounce of self respect she should have left Tom and his family years ago. Next Chapter - She gets AIDS and gives it to Tom.

SleeplessinMD

Typical

Typical story by Just Plain Bob. Disgusting story about depraved people that Just Plain Bob seems to thrive on. 60 year old George

Sorry, there is no one to root for in this story!

Everyone is pathetic in it. Slut-wife, pussy husband, arrogant brother-in-law, etc.
What's the matter, JPB? You submitted several good stories with strong husband figures then you went off the deep end and submitted several where the husband is a wimp again. Is there a tally sheet posted somewhere that I can see when the next good story is coming out?

Bullshit

This is your worst story ever. And you have posted a lot of shitty stories.

Good as usual, but...

As always, orthogonal and interesting. But, liking your work as much as I do, I felt a little of what your critics felt: perhaps without knowing it, they are advocates of the old (and often overrated) writers' advice: "The hero (or heroine) must struggle against great odds to achieve a worthwhile goal." I don't think you necessarily need to follow that advice, but heres the thing: you aren't doing this just for yourself. If you were, you wouldn't need an audience. The inescapable truth is this: you have to give your reader something to come back to. It doesn't have to be a happy ending, but it has to involve some kind of growth in the protagonist (negative or positive) and it has to satisfy something in the reader. I'm not sure this story did that. On the other hand, you are such a good writer I just enjoyed the artistry--and perhaps that's enough. Keep on trucking, JPB.

hmm

in a way, i like this JPB story. great writing.

justification

he didn't do what, and she did what ?she joins shelly as a slut, and has 14 partners in 3 days?
that is not casual sex, but serious deparvaity. methinks she was already gone, and joe's, etc. she's just one of many and deserves the contempt.

Subconscious curiosity

Joey goes after her for 8 years and with her repeated, imploring requests, her husband does nothing.
I think she finally made a decision to manhandle Joey herself, but I also think that once she got him in the room, hubby not following, her subconscious curiosity began to surface and she justified grabbing Joey and then things progressed. For her sanctity, she felt like she was resisting, she tried, but ended up with a damn good exhilarating fuck.
Now consious bothering her and probably subleminal desires to really get some good fucking one thing leads to some great sex. Great sex that she gets involved in, in a manner that she can justify some relucyance, but great sex nonetheless.
Nothing is going to happen with the wimp and she will be totally debased and disgraced by Joey so I think she should show up at the Bowling Alley with a local news reporter, camerman, talk to the manager (maybe offer him a little secret nooky to cooperate) go out into the bowling alley and yell for everyones attention; whereas, she screams at her hubby that he is a wimp, not a man and explains why and how. Further she yells out that Joey raped her along with other members of the family and hubby allowed it and finally in tears wants to know if anyone can give her a job, just for room and board, no sex, until she can find an aattorney to take her case on a contingency basis, Crying (she's good) she drops to her kneews, the newspaper has all the info for the next days paper along with pictures of her crying, hubby and even Joey who happened to be there. The gentleman who went out and gently assisted her off the floor, was an attorney...And...her husband to be!

Not one of your better ones.

In fact, it was some pretty sick shit.

You lost it here. I won't even bother rating this. Disappointed.

For once I agree with anonymous...Subconscious curiosity

Puts thinking cap on. Nice little set up Bob; I think I may have my next continuation of one of your gems. lol

It’ll be a challenge, but I think I have the makings in mind.

Thank Bob, as always, you are entertaining.

Amanda

Quite a dilemma she is in

It's certainly a different kind of storyline, but interesting.

I'd like to see how this works out for her.

THIS

was a total loss for me.

Total garbage

He has a big cock, I can't help it, I got to have it story. I gave it a 1.

sad and pathetic

never read such pathetic crap before. the slut's brain must be soggy with cunt juice. long live america!

JPB, can I write a part 3 to this

I would love to answer this.