by Chris Cross
Loved the illistrations also. First time for that. More please and don't forget the ittistrations.
That brought back some memories! Great realistic story but the car bonnet was a bit tricky! Wasn't it too hot after an hours driving?
Loved the illustrations. Wonderfully graphic to reflect the text. Great tits!
Needs to be read again before submissiom though. Some rather strange grammar in places but over all I thought it was great.
Loved this chapter, but it's a little rote. Needs more tension. Anybody who takes as long as you do to cum, should be able to better describe the sensations of progressive moments.
practice, practice, practice.
Rudy
great pics great story looking forard to more stories for a great writer.just finished reading ch01 to ch06b cant wait for ch07
so its been over 5 months since the last story, still waiting for the next chapter and hopefully more after that.
Very descriptive and the most glorious pics. I wanted to be fucked by him within the first 2 chapters. My kind of guy, my kind of author. Thank you.
It's almost impossible to stop reading now, I wouldn't mind getting to the end of this series and reading more of your work. You're a great writer!! And an artist too.
Yes, please write another chapter to this story. It was great and had me very horny and playing with my clit wishing I was Marie getting fucked on the blanket in open air.
Jill N.Z.
All ur chapters so far have been so is amazing... Had me wishing i was every one of those girls. Please don't stop writing, you are too good at this! I dont need to watch videos anymore, I can get off with this with no doubt. Haha thanks!(: