All Comments on 'A Week to Remember Ch. 06B'

by Chris Cross

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Loved it...

Loved the illistrations also. First time for that. More please and don't forget the ittistrations.

OVERLANDOVERLANDabout 18 years ago
THAT'S THE WAY TO DO IT!

That brought back some memories! Great realistic story but the car bonnet was a bit tricky! Wasn't it too hot after an hours driving?

Loved the illustrations. Wonderfully graphic to reflect the text. Great tits!

Needs to be read again before submissiom though. Some rather strange grammar in places but over all I thought it was great.

rudystahrmanrudystahrmanabout 18 years ago
Hot Story

Loved this chapter, but it's a little rote. Needs more tension. Anybody who takes as long as you do to cum, should be able to better describe the sensations of progressive moments.

practice, practice, practice.

Rudy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Mmm...hot

Sexay!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
waiting for more

great pics great story looking forard to more stories for a great writer.just finished reading ch01 to ch06b cant wait for ch07

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
still waiting

so its been over 5 months since the last story, still waiting for the next chapter and hopefully more after that.

juicebangjuicebangover 16 years ago
JUICY

Very descriptive and the most glorious pics. I wanted to be fucked by him within the first 2 chapters. My kind of guy, my kind of author. Thank you.

KadhroghKadhroghover 14 years ago
Also loved this one

It's almost impossible to stop reading now, I wouldn't mind getting to the end of this series and reading more of your work. You're a great writer!! And an artist too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More Please

Yes, please write another chapter to this story. It was great and had me very horny and playing with my clit wishing I was Marie getting fucked on the blanket in open air.

Jill N.Z.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
wow.

that was so fucking amazing. but make it more explicit

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Amazzingggggg

All ur chapters so far have been so is amazing... Had me wishing i was every one of those girls. Please don't stop writing, you are too good at this! I dont need to watch videos anymore, I can get off with this with no doubt. Haha thanks!(:

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Good job. Outdoor sex is marvelous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOW

nice read for fingering urself when u dont get any

Anonymous
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