homeNon-Erotic PoetryAnother Brick FallsPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Another Brick Falls

byWyldBreeze©
All
Comments (3)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz01/24/06

~~

Stronger than "How Do I Tell Him,"
And Welcome to Lit.

Each last line had me wondering
Where this was going
Until you summed it up so wonderfully.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by duddle14601/28/07

bricks

Every day in every way ~ my heart belongs to you.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Amyfriend01/30/07

Look hard and you will find..

as you well did...a lover that will be kind...Nicely done.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Another Brick Falls  or
More submissions by WyldBreeze.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel