All Comments on 'At the Beach'

Great story and well written!

Without a doubt, one of the best I have read. Great story, great build-up and great climax. Can't wait to read more.

An excellent well written mom n son incest story.

oh, it was so hot! What did it feel like to him?

Story started out ok back finish very strong. Well written and there seems great potential for an even steamier chapter two. It's the first story of yours I've read and I will read your others. Will look forward to future stories.

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ! Delicious .

Great story. Keep wriiting away. Can't wait for next chapter......Will there be one?? Try to include some more dirty talk/dialogue, but not too over the top though-that damages the credibility of the story. So far you are doing great. Excellent scripted details. Seemed very real in terms of details of how the characters felt about ea. other. Far out! wow!

Awsome story. It kept me going hard. Would like to read Ch2. Keep up the good work.

Nice one!

well done. lots of teasing anticipation and the payoff was some hot fucking. good job

Repetition of 'some,' irritated slightly. Otherwise quite entertaining. 3stars.

great storys keep it up

this story was so believable erotic and hot

A magical moment! Thank you for sharing it with us

In a field of craftsmen you are an artist. Well written - well done.

5 Stars!

Hey!

Just sayin’

Tho I know to go slow. I am, after all, anonymous.

Loved the build up and final tension.

So much tenderness.