Is The Third Time a Charm?

A true romance

Thanks this really made me feel good. The timing and pacing were just right and the story matter was excellent.

Thankyou

Great story

Well done, great story.

Great

Another winner! Of the the 52 stories posted by you on Literotica, I have rated 49 of them as 100. Only the two about six months to live did I think were not worthy of you. Please continue to share your stories with us.

Boyd

An absolutly beautiful story!

A lot of sadness, but more warmth at the end!

Great job!

DJ

Good

Indeed very good!!!

A great story, I mean really great

DG:
You've always written readable and thoroughly enjoyable stories. This is no exception. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Excellent

Couldn't have been any better after the hard knocks for both. they'll have a great life together, all four of them.

Keep writing this type of story, it's good for the heart.

great story

This story is really romantic. I loved it.

A great story DG

A very romantic story. With a little bit of the perils of Pauline.

This story does typify what pop always said. Never screw a girl you didn't feel some love, respect for. Or always have protection.

Really enjoyed this tale! Sad, funny, loving romantic.

perfect!

perfect! thanks for writing

Very nice, DG

You did manage to make tears come to my eye.

Beautiful story

There is something about an innocent little baby girl that softens the heart of any man. Heart warming story, thanks for sharing it.

Totally one of your better stories

Totally,

Loved it from start to finish.

loved it

loved the story came from the heart and had me crying

Thanks

Great Story DG

What a heartwraming tale. Sometimes in the scheme of life there are rewards for enduring the difficult times. These two both endured some personal hell and ended up with a wonderful life.

He contributed greatly to his own hell and she was just the innocent victim in hers, but together they will indeed have heaven on earth.

Thanks for this story. It made my day.

Charleybear

Heartwarming!

About as good as it gets. Thanks for another great read DG. Always a fan of your stories. Keep them coming, please.
An avid fan.

The third time? It has worked for me!

Wow, what a tear jerker.

Don't want to spoil the mood, just say good one. And believe
me, God will help, I know from experience. Great one..Dave

Sniff sniff, I am crying.

Also, my wife is crying, my kids are crying, my brother is crying, my mailman is crying, my dog is crying, my .......
Sorry,m just had to say that.

For crying out loud, I liked the story.

Please pass the hankies.

Good job. Thanks!

z00

Yes I had eyes tearing!

DG what more can be added to the other comments you have received. This was a great story as always. Thank you.

Well Done...

Great romantic story...I didn't cry but sure smiled at the end. And they only "lost" 5 years (instead of 7 or 10 or 20).

Nothing

Nothing to say ,everything has already been said by others.Would it be OK if I said brilliant to add to all the other comments?It is going to take a miracle of a story to stop this one winning.

DG Hear The Author

I write a lot of stories and for an amature I have a lot of fun. I like to write about real life and the way I see it. This story felt special to me. Really special It made me fill with emotion as I was writing it. I am so glad that you the readers have felt it too.
The editors of this story felt it to. They are two of the best.So again from the bottom of my heart, 'Thank you for reading my stories.' Writing is half the fun the comments and feedback is the other.
With sincere appreciation.
DG Hear

What else can I add?

This has to be one of the best, most heart-rending stories I've read on this site

“And that’s Romantic…”

- to quote from Julia Roberts. What else can I say? Thank you.
p.s. Unlike the previous reader, who got so excited that he kept the rating on default, despite praising the story - I am not forgetting the rating. Here goes - a resounding 100!

good job and good luck

Very nice work.... good luck

Enjoyable Story

I liked the story. What caused me to give it a lower score was your dialogue. Continually you used "said", to the point that I cringed each time I saw it. Try doing something else to tie your dialogue to your characters. Other than that small criticism, a well done story.

Truly a special for Valentine's Day !!

A heart-warming tale full of heartache and love. He was the master of his own misery while she was the innocent victim of hers as was little Carly! With the love that they have for each other, they have found, together, the heaven that they deserve. A really, really wonderful and superbly crafted tale DG - it was only improved by the lack of sex!

Great Story

You knocked it out of the park again. You seem to have great insite. Loved this story.
Ngj

Beautiful story

You write some remarkable stories--thanks so much. The way you write makes the reader feel like they are watching and feeling the writing unfold--great talent!
Thanks,
Sam

Fluff!

I thought this was a Porn site, not a CORN site. A mundane bit of fluff, but; (as always) well enough written to make it palatable.

Great Story

As always.

another great dg story

D G u r the best author on literotica, ill even go one better, i enjoy your stories better than anyone else i read. THANKS A LOT

Excelence

Give DG Hear the Golden EIW Pen, (excelence in writing)sweet, tender, real, actually better than real life, which is more like the first two marriages. It is a nice tale and I hope someone's life really was as blessed in love as those two were. And I appreciate that you deemed to keep the sex out of it, in this case it was most appropriate to do so. Overall well done.

A great story

and I thank you for it.I have read it several times and enjoyed it each time. But I wonder....the scores on the "top list" are as high as other categories but the number of votes is so low. What kind of readers do we have here who flock to "loving wives" but seem to ignore this category. Some if not most of the best tales are here along with mature and romance. Too bad. Their loss. Regardless, thank you for the effort you put into all categories. I enjoy them all. Jim

Thanks

For a great story.

great story!ed17

THE 3RD TIME IS NOT A CHARM

but its always an experience. TK U MLJ LV NV

1 Big Box of Kleenex, ;}

Man you had this 62 yr. old grabbing Kleenx, Great Read, keep up the great work.

Yea I needed a tisue also to read this storie.

Don't know where you came up with this story it was almost as if I was watching it on one of those women’s TV movie shows on cable or satellite. With a little more filler you might could produce it and sell it to them. LOL the only problem is they guy usually is the bad guy and the women would have to be the hero. So you would have to kill off the real mother while she was still in the hospital. You would also have to build her up so there would be a little more sympathy for her. Can't have any women look bad only men. LOL Good story

Why do I continually beat myself over the head by reading these stories?

Anything with a distressed baby or abused child or a child discovering a mom or dad that they didn't know they had just turns me into a pile of blubbering goo.

What can I say!

Most of your stories are exceptional.
George in Omaha

Well done story

Complex story l9ne with intersecting stories - not just linear or parallel story telling -

Good people in the end do well the pothers drift away - the premie in the hospital part was pretty well done for someone I doubt has ever been in a neonatal ICU - you got the emotions down perfectly.

Second Read

I read this a couple of months ago and I think I enjoyed it even more
this time. It is an extremely nice story!
George in Omaha

I don't care if she is only 2 years old

She will get my steel toed boot in the face if she starts throwing "pedals" at me! Bicycle parts fucking hurt when thrown at you!

Damn, you did it again!

I was sitting up, trying to get sleepy enough to go off to bed. I picked this story at random and it did the trick. I'm sleepy now, and I loved the story. I'll go off to sleep with a smile on my face. Pleasant dreams? You bet!

Once again, thank you.

WHENEVER ONE STOPS TRYING

the dirt covering is near-by. TK U MLJ LV NV

Enjoyed it

a quaint tale. Thanks.