All Comments on 'Valentine~69'

cute, sexy full of passion and fun...great word scheme and imagery...a real gem!

cool perspective of valentines and positions... a very 'cool' poem.

Isn't the word valentine latin for 'Giving new meaning to divine?'

That last line seems a bit odd, like an extra line that really doesn't belong. Just taking it away seems to leave everything sort of hanging. Try to juggle around the last few lines and see what you think; instead of:

As we entwine

Giving new meaning to divine

My sweet, sweet Valentine...

Let's sixty-nine...

Until the sun does shine

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try something like:

As we entwine

My sweet, sweet Valentine...

Let's sixty-nine

And give new meaning to divine...

Nice