by tungtied2u
I'm sure there is some trimming to do, but this is well-written and worthy of comment - and would have more, I'm sure, if it were not buried so deep down the page.
Peace, brother, in the hills.
I enjoyed your poem, it was filled with images that had me reading it twice <grin
My only concern here is with the frenetic pace of the words throughout. It's like the frantic pace of city life moves with the reader out into the country; the words say calming, soothing, but their pace says, go, go go...
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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