All Comments on 'Cradle'

by tungtied2u

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TheRainManTheRainManabout 18 years ago
Nice read.

I'm sure there is some trimming to do, but this is well-written and worthy of comment - and would have more, I'm sure, if it were not buried so deep down the page.

Peace, brother, in the hills.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
nice write

I enjoyed your poem, it was filled with images that had me reading it twice <grin

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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My only concern here is with the frenetic pace of the words throughout. It's like the frantic pace of city life moves with the reader out into the country; the words say calming, soothing, but their pace says, go, go go...

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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