All Comments on 'Kiss The Right Note'

This is slam poetry at its finest-- it demands to be read aloud! It tastes so good going down that you don't even mind the poison in the words.

Excellent, Liar!

Fly

whores or Parisian whores?

I'n not sure if I'm reading it right but I've been told Berlin ones are best.

Great read and as Fly says, it should be read aloud.

bb

I'd have loved an audio but it's a joy to read as is. Wild ride, Liar!

Tess

Whoa! That's all I have to say.

...in both texture and sound.

I don't want to be a broken record, so for my thoughts, see the comments below.

I read your poem, and... it is a poem, right? I have no idea what it is about. Thanks for the read.

You write great lines that I wish I wrote:

I am a slide snide copycat

in silver dollar shoes.

This is something slick writing. I likes.

and could almost hear music as that poem played in my head. Something smooth and cool and a little jazzy.