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Good to Read You
You must be Sandman. Masturbation Club is your best ever! Thanks.
I dunno
way too long to expect anyone to read the whole thing. I got to page 6 I think...
As for the actual story, it doesn't make alot of sense, does it? This guy goes and cheats on his wife but she's ok with it because he didn't actually have intercourse with anyone? Then she turns around and makes him sit on the balcony while she does the same thing? I mean, I know it's a story but I do prefer a little realism in my stories.
Awesome
Sandman, this was an awesome story. I have enjoyed all of your stories to date. I wonder how many of them are from your own experiences? Have you ever been to any masturbation parties ;) ? Hostess
Well Done
Who the hell is Sandman and why would anyone think the author has been to a masturbation club anyway-excellent read if you have the time!
great but long..... worth the time!!!!
long but worthy read
Yummy....
Your story has been mentioned in the "New Story Review" Thread as a "Blast from the Past" post 820. You can read this review on Lits Author's Hangout forum on the bulletin boards.
Thanks,
Red
WOW!!!!!!!
Wow!!!!! what a story, Long and very satisfying!!! loved it all.. from real experiences?? i hope so!
VERY nice!!
I have to say at first i was a little thrown off my how long it was, but I found myself reading some every day and coming back day after day reading more. I just finished it and I thought it was great. Very Nice!!
Good, but
It was a long read, and overall was a decent read. It was difficult to keep reading when it turned slightly gay/bi. Also, it was really hard to read with the weird use of "quotes" as punctuation, and not using quotes to show conversation.
Hell of a series, keep up the good work! Definitely got some ideas to try in my own life!
A real enjoyment
Yes it was long but like a book, I looked forward to reading more each day and while you had to realize this was mostly fantasy land it did manage to do the job we want in getting aroused ( isn't that why we read these stories) I have to confess I got off on almost every page, couple of times on a couple very pleasurable and love the mastubation club concept would like to try it if my wife was nearly as open minded as Anna in the story.
Very good read.
misspellings
I suppose it's besides the point, but given a story I submitted kept getting sent back
for punctuation corrections, I cannot believe the amount of misspellings in this story - the apostrophized singular nouns instead of proper plurals; it's spelled "jism" not "jisim,
capitalizations of words that don't need it. Oh well.
Awesome
I remember reading this series a while ago, but couldn't remember the name. Loved it!
DFW (Drippin F'n Wet)
If I could have...I would have given it 10 STARS (it was that good) !!!
read the whole thing!
despite the random quotes which got on my nerves, i read the whole thing, page or two at a time. well done!
Fantastic
I loved it. Couldn't stop reading it from start to finish. Very good read, very erotic and sexy. Loved it.
wet panties
As I read Many Feathers story I could not help but touch myself and now my panties re a little moist. It has been a long time since a man last went down on me. I am shy about being with another woman but think of such and fantasize often about it. I love to taste myself when I masturbate and would love to do so with a partner, even another woman. But for now I need address the need I now feel. Pleasant orgasms,
Marilyn
Get an editor.
An editor would have cut 75 to 80% of the word count from this story. It's a good lesson in how more words aren't always better. In this case, the author is undoubtedly losing readers because the story could have been communicated in 2,000 words and the writer submitted 100,000 words. It's not worth reading.
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