by inlovewithyourghost
Love is a hard thing at the best of times. When you’re afraid to risk letting someone know how you feel, it’s even harder. I’m glad they found one another again before it was too late! Well Done author!
Bessides being a real tear jerker, this was one of the most romantic and moving stories that I have read.
i loved the way you caught the emotions and built up the suspense in such a short piece. The story begs to be continued, but at the same time, leaves me with a satisfied feeling of completion - you've given a wonderful window into that moment and those characters. Really well done.
I loved this ... and I so wish there was another chapter! I do love best friend stories! :) ~ L
Can you write more to the story please! it was so good! you really stopped at a good but bad part! why did you stop!
...but it finished a bit too abruptly. It read almost as if you got bored with writing the story and decided to stop. A pity really because it was quite well written and seemed to promised much more than it delivered.
But I wish it had been longer. Thanks for sharing it with us.