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Well, she could have just left him -
She had all the evidence she needed. I guess that's what she felt she needed for retribution.
I like your writing style, but you go places I've never been!
DJ
Very good
Revenge is sweet! Let the punishment fit the crime.
Boyd
Revenge over done
It usually is overdone when a woman is doing it.
Bad enough she is fucking everyone in town but to sit on his face? Too much!
The right story
This is the right story at just the right time. Classic JPB.
Male Humiliation 101
The writer made the husband a really bad man (possessive and a cheater) but hubby never did humiliate her intentionally or to her face.
So opportunistic as abnormally, the writer gathers 87,000 men of color with gigundus cocks to mind fuck and humiliate the albeit cheating bastard within a cunthair of his mental stability - again normal bobie fare for the humiliation freaks who need it pathetically.
Some semi-normal readers don't feel comfortable with this writers helpless humiliation penchant but don't clearly see the humilaition intent as most of us do. See some comments below.
This writers talent is very strong and prolific, but in 95% of his efforts tilts toward his prediliction of sorid helpless male humiliation. This is a waste for 99% of the readers which is really sad, but the few sick freakies who need pathetic helpless male humiliation love him. See comments below.
Constructively, I would hope that he sees what is possible and changes as have some other great authors here.
Time will tell - won't it bobie.
I think she found exactly what to get him.
Being an equal opportunity hater of cheating spouses, I thought her revenge was great.
Just Plain Bob at his best
This story was deserved revenge to the extreme but entertaining.
I’m not into probably half the stories you put out but you are such a good writer.
I always read your stories though not all ways all the way through. If it’s not my kind of story I move on and don’t vote or comment. Many times I know by the heading it’s not going to be a story I’d care for, but I still scan it. I never know what you might come up with.
I don’t agree with the comment you should learn to write what the majority of readers might find more acceptable. Your talent is one of the best on this web site.
I have to give you a 5 and 100 as I have never seen one person write so well and as commented on before, so prolific. How can one person write so many stories almost everyday and sometimes multiple stories per day?
I would say for you to keep writing but I believe you have a tuned mindset that listens to no one and you are going to do what you want anyway. Your psyche seems to hold tales or horrors that would disturb many people.
With respect for your talent.
Peggytwitty
A deafening silence!
First, congratulations to JPB, for one of the few occasions in which you come out of the shelter of no public response option. It’s courageous. And After this story, I believe that I have a better understanding reg. your usual norm.
Second, I really enjoyed your story, which to me (as in many of your stories was border line between serious and parody. One way or another,It was fun!
Third, regarding readers’ responses, or better yet, the near lack of responses, now this is a deafening silence! Where are all the moralists and the “marriage preservationists” (ok I made this one up) when finally the woman is the one who does not want to be “a wimp”? If it was a man taking the revenge, you would see by now twenty to thirty congratulatory messages. Admittedly, I don’t care for many of the roles that JPB gives to his male characters, but here he extends himself to what I thought was the mainstream norms: marital fidelity and consequences for cheating! And what do we hear? A mere congratulatory whisper! It is amusing to read the apologists for the husband, for what it’s worth, at least they are honest!
So let me get it right, revenge is for men and women should sit and be gracious when their husbands cuckold them, or at least not get revenge, which is 'un-womanly'(how victorian) . At least now it’s in the open. Of course any one who knows that what I say does not apply to HIM, could easily rectify the situation by congratulating JPB, or at least not roast me!
Since when is a gangbang a surprise in a JPB story
Kolkore praised this work by JPB but I didn't find it especially enlightening but rather droll. Two wrongs don't make a right, and thirteen wrongs don't either. What we have here are two cheaters, plain and simple.
The wife forfeits my sympathy when she opts for the revenge gangbang (gangbangs are a JPB trademark, after all). The husband is apparently mentally unbalanced. He wants absolute ownership of his wife but is so morally corrupt that he's humping two other women in violation of his marital vows. The author left the reasons why these people act as they do as exercises for the reader. I suspect JPB had no idea why he wrote them as he did. It probably seemed like a good idea at the time.
The revenge in the story is curious. The wife fornicates with several partners in an attempt to spite the husband but soils herself in the process. Who would want such damaged goods? And where did this sudden vindictiveness come from? The wife seems to be reasonably intelligent, rational and well-adjusted so, of course, she decides to have a gangbang to pay her faithless hubby pack for his adulteries. Given JPB's deep-seated hatred of women, this twist makes perfectly good sense: by having the wife debase herself, she becomes the villain in the piece, and Bob's need for the male to be vindicated is satisfied.
Neither of the two main characters in the story are admirable or likeable, and I found it difficult to care what happens to them. If they divorce, that's fine. If they don't, that's okay too.
Re: Male Humiliation 101
This is inaccurate. If there is one common theme to JPBs story, it is revenge. This one just happens to be that of a woman against a man (which is not the more common themes).
And I would go further and say that the 'humiliation' that is common to his stories is just part of the human condition. Even a upright ultra Alpha male is going to be slightly humiliated by knowing his wife is parking someone else's shoes under his bed when he's away. That he dwells on these emotions allows us to get in touch with the character. And since the vast majority of us aren't ultra Alpha males, how much more humiliation will we feel?
Life is complex
She screwed up
As an Officer of the Court, (Process server) Jerome is obligated to tell the truth or risk losing his job and going to jail for perjury. No way he lies about all the men having sex with the stupid wife. There's nothing in it for him to lie and plenty to loose if he does lie. He also has her sperm covered panties. She's about to go down for Adultery. Best she can do is get a 50/50 split and spend the remaining years of her life looking back over her shoulder for Harry to serve up some intense revenge.
A,M,F, TRANSLATION OPEN FOR INTERPETATION
and with a vengeance for free, TK U MLJ LV NV
Just another stupid woman
When Harry's lawyer threatened the men, they testified against her rather than face jail time for perjury and she got her divorce alright. But all she got was a 50/50 split because the Courts don't care about infidelity and they were both guilty. So Harry kept right on screwing the other woman and she ended up alone. Wave bye bye on your way out the door honey. You lost.
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