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Awesome Story
I can't wait for the next chapter.
You have to keep going
This is too good to just leave at such an opportune moment. You've got the suspense built, please keep going.
Ah, young love
That was a sweet, innocent story of the beginning of love. She is smitten and he is clueless and you did a great job of painting that picture.
great
loved it ,great start .cant wait for the next chapter!!
good
with on glaring problem. Statuesque means that someone is large and tall, not just tall. Therefor someone who only weighs 115 cannot possibly be statuesque.
Other then that, keep going :)
Good
Very interesting beginning!
Boyd
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