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A very sweet tale
And very well told. I loved the remembrance at the end. I could almost imagine the slight smile on his face as he said those words.
Excellent Poignant Tale
And very well presented. A neat tale with a little nostalgic feeling and not quite what you expect.
A very enjoyable story!
Great
I loved your story!
Boyd
Esoteric and lovingly written
Simple story, lovingly written
Fantasex13 Good write!
I really enjoyed this story. It was intense and really interesting. You write well, and your paragraphs are not too long. A few maybe,but not bad. I think you have great potential. And will go far.
Very nice
A very nice recount of your youth (if autobiographical). A gentle nostalgia which leaves one with an ache in their heart. Excellent weaving of sweetness and sadness.
What a great simple story
That's a life time. There is a chance coming and going. Your story is very simple but great. I love to read it. Thank you for this great story.
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