All Comments on 'Breaking the Chain~~ ~~'

wow...

thought provoking and story telling all in one!

**HUGS**

~LB~

Enjoyed the read.

Just goes to show

Even an alleged East Texas redneck

Can have words so deep

That demand the reader be thinking.

from the mind of make-shift order....your eyes be open...great lines ...sounds like du had a hand in this though or could have..winks/blue

Damn, this doesn't sound like the ravings of a man who never has to release the safety catch on his pistol.

but lacks focus, and a unity of theme and image. nice try.