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A very good start
Had to give it a 75 It needs to be completed. Don't stop just when its getting interesting. It seems so many wrighters are doing that, if your going to start a story finish it Please.
Good
you need to finish this one..... its a nice story
Please don't stop now
just when its getting interesting. Give us another chapter as soon as you can. I like your writing style and feel you have a gift as an erotic story teller.
don't finish it
It's bad enough as it is. Do not finish it. In fact, don't write any more.
KInd of dumb and poorly thought out
I'm being kind and giving it 50--that's for the 50% that I read before I gave up on it. The 8 inch cock detracted even more
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