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still more
of the same stupied crap as the first 3 ch. Hope this writer eather stops writing or finds a new topic.
Whim...
What a whimp. Chuck a do da do...
Thre previous 2 readers were too kind
I know there are web sites looking for femdom wimp stories no matter what the quality of writing is, please find one and make us all happy.
Great Story
Loved this story. i hope there will be more comming soon.
WOW!!!!
Well i myself would be sad if this story stopped. is it the best i have read well no but it has promise. you people are trying to discourage someone who could be great. All this because you really dont like her subject matter. How immature does that make some people.
I mean ok so what its a dominate woman going after what she wants. So what if she wants a kid by someone she can push around. If thats what the writer is into is it right for us to critic the subject matter. that seems to be what most of the bad comments tend to center around. that followed by the writing style that is
Just cause one person doesnt like something doesnt mean that there are not 3 others saying how much they like it.
Wondering
about this
First rule
First rule of a master is to take care of his pet. This is no Mistress, an abused dog knows more kindness--gets better treatment than him. He is hurt--he has cuts and has been left alone, hanging all night. In the morning, does she nurses those wounds? Does she clean them, apply at least a basic antiseptic? Nope, she only restores his circulation...oh, but he loves her...abused dogs love their masters. They seek their approval. They know no better. Truly dissapointed in this story.
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