by Grey Eagle 286
This was short and sweet. Kind of cute, actually. A nice little twist at the end, and a zinger too!
The first twist was the story's basis and was good.
The second twist ruined the Valentine's Nature of the story by saying sweet wifey was (is?) a whore when he married her (as having fucked anyone and anything that had a cock) and now instead of hubby being a good guy suddenly he is a sorid depraved pervert for marrying a whore whose child may or may not be his.
Kinda cool how a story can pivot from loving parents to be, to a couple of sicko's who don't deserve to bring a baby into this house of john's and whores.
What were you thinking writer? Happy St. Valentines Day
That was such a great story with the great twist at the end. The sweet repented hooker.
There are many who marry a girl who did 50 guys when younger and not ready to settle down. Some found the greatest loving faithful wife who found the one man she could call mister right.
If a guy had 50 girls he was a man’s man. The girls they were with I guess, should never get married because they were sluts. We defiantly have a double standard here.
What happened before you meet and marry in most cases would be best left unsaid.
There have been allot of stories written on this scenario.
Thank you for the story!
I felt the story was inconsistent, at one stage the woman is considering the earnings of a hooker and seems amazed with the earnings potential, then turns out she used to be one.
Grey Eagle:
You have written some very fine stories and this is short, but by no means an exception. I kept wanting to sneak a peak at the ending, so maybe it was a good idea that you kept it short so I could resist the temptation. Thank You. Ronnie W.
But, as mentioned already, the fact she was a Joy's Escort doesn't jibe with her earlier thoughts about it.
A neat twist though!
She finds a phone number on a credit card statement and then goes to the computer to open up a website? This makes absolutely no sense. Do you need convoluted premises for all your stories?
In response to the comment below. It was Completely plausible. Thanks for working so hard to keep us entertained.
You are creative and write well.
It seems to me all the wives in the loving wives section are cheaters just waiting to happen or already did happen I don't get it. I guess they already sow their wild oats
A very nice little short story. Excellent twist at the end. Thank you.
A lot of military guys bring home prostitutes from overseas. A lot of them make fine wives. Some don't if they were just trying to get over here and move on after they have been married a bit and got their citizenship. I think a lot of porn stars are married as well. Not everyone accepts the premise on this site, but there is sex and there is making love. A lot of married people...I would say most...just have sex after being married a while. Deny that!
Excellent story with twist. There are a similar story from DGHear in the Romance part: "Finding The Right Woman".
is more important than protecting her fathers reputation. Especially when their own background would have helped her to understand.
I think the comment about meeting her through Joy's escorts was a joke..light hearted. why, she didn't recognize the phone number, had to look it up.
Really well done -
You gotta love a reformed hooker - no evangelist like a reformed sinner roflmao.
So she better be tolerant of dad right ??!!
There is communication. Makes a nice change from instant over the top revenge.
A short and funny story...The title only in the end was understood...4*
But he should have asked her some more questions and gotten her to admit she didn't trust him. Next thing you know she's going to add up all the money she could make as an escort and she's going back to work for Joy!
The only thing husband could have done better was to tell wife sooner. It was refreshing to see a non cheating good ending .
Fisherone, the wife just confessed to having been a whore when she met her future husband..that's a good ending?
"the wife just confessed to having been a whore when she met her future husband"
He knew already. Bill obviously booked her, then they fell in love and got married.
you got me. I got a belly laugh out of that one. Almost didn't finish it. Glad I did. Gave me a grin and a laugh.
I could foresee the Dad being the escort user but was unsure why he would ask his son in law to pay and be repaid, but the answer was satisfactory. I see that a number of readers were getting all their moral knickers in a twist but this is just a story and the final twist that the wife worked on her back to get through college was an absolute hoot. Well done, made me laugh.
One of the funniest “twists” I’ve read here. Actually, it’s a double twist, isn’t it?
5-stars
I love the ending and can honestly say that I didn't see that coming!.....Fantastic, Funny, & And an all round Great read!....Corny Comment Hey!....
5 Stars ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!
When she did the math on the money and said it was a good job she also said "Yeah, but could you have sex with any guy you didn't know who just walked in off the street? That took guts. It was craziness to even think that way anymore."
Think that way ANYMORE. So she told us she had been an escort.
One gap for me was her saying she told her dad she had a scholarship. Any parent would know if your kid got a scholarship or not. Better off if she said she had a job bartending or something.
As for the guy marrying a whore? Hey, it's his life. He just better hope she doesn't want to go back to the old trade. She already showed us she was excited about making a few grand a month by only doing an hour or so a few times a week.
I didn't see the end coming , I was busy trying to figure out what the guy was doing. Great story.
The BEAR
Painting hubby with the "cheatin' brush". Turns out she's tainted herself. LMAO!
Cute!!!! Good one!!! That put a big smile on my face!! Thank you form a really fun read!! 5 stars as usual for your tales.
Fin story. The last paragraph bumped it from four stars to five. Unlike some others, I stick with one-to-five stars, no " 10 Big Blazing Stars!" for me. This one, I would be tempted to go with six.
JPB