by LolaB
The oils, the scents, the bath...Maybe, I thought, this is going somewhere. Then...Arimis after shave???
Lola the air went out of your sail with that line. But the story as a whole was well written, you can write, girl! I liked it, though there is room to expand on various parts of this tale. So many good metaphors, any one of the scenes could have been expanded into a story of its own.
Good luck.
i am sure by the end of your evening your vaious body openings will be swimming with semen, i hope it all organic.
Try Paco Rabanne pour homme! :-)
I liked the female sexual power and confidence! Write more!
Great story! Totally erotic and so full of feeling and erotic pleasures! Keep them cumin for us!
That was a great recap of a very pleasurable and public moment.
Excellent build up and great writing made this a memorable read.
Thank you