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I don't like where this is going
Your story "winning strategy" was fine. Your introduction of Frank having an affair with this guys wife makes no sense. Only a very minute portion of the male population would allow themselves to be cuckolded. It would make more sense to get marriage counselling and/or a divorce. I'm sorry you took the story this way. I sincerely hope Frank and the wife lose something extremely valuable to them for their adultery.
TOTAL WASTE OF PAPER
TO MANY SUB PLOTS AND WAY TO SLOW IN THE IN GETTING TO THIRD BASE, AND THE IDEA OF DOING THIS WITH KIDS IN THE HOUSE . VERY WEAK PLOT LINE, EXTRA MARITAL AFAIR OK , BUT THE GUY WAITING FOR HIS WIFE DRESSED AS A A WOMAN IN BED , DONT THINK SO.
Great start
Your story is my fantasy. Keep it coming.
Now here is an example of
some seriously sick people.
What a sick couple of poople. Real life Oh Yeah!
OK this the comment I posted on his other story.
Oh great, a closet Transvestite at best! It’s one thing to dress up as a woman for a costume party but this guy is already having a hard on over it.
Oh great a Fetish and Transvestite story. What’s next BDSM and Submissive as she uses a strap-on on him. Maybe gay as he does another guy. He’s a sick puppy if he thinks he is straight.
Please tell me there is somewhere in here, a loving wives story as advertised.
Now I guess we see the Gay side come out.
Sick fantasies are all this guy writes about and I have yet to see anything about consequences, grief, remorse, love or any other real life emotion as in a loving wife story.
Sick minds are not erotic, just sad.
I’m sorry to say the story doesn’t come together very well either
keep it up,it,s very erotic.
thought I would leave a very positive comment.Your writing is excellent,the subject matter is extremly erotic to SOME people(me for one!) Others will hate it,ignore them!! You are building the story brilliantly , had a hard on throughout.
The comments are more entertaining than the story
While I only found this story average I did enjoy the moronic comments. Sweet Jesus Lil Peggy! This makes the second, count em, two crossdressing stories in the "Loving Wives" section and on the same day no less! You might just shit your pants and go blind if you see someone else actually put a story in the wrong section. First, just calm down! You'll be fine, even without the pills, if you just stop reading the story and move on to the next one if you find it not to your liking. Second, stop writing that you just don't find a story realistic. Literotica is not a site based on reality. Sure some of the stories are real but most are not. If you want a realistic novel go out and read John Grisham or someone like that.
As for the meathead who suggested that these people should have sought out counselling or gotten a divorce. I'm afraid there is no real help available until they invent a time travel machine and you can go back and stop whomever dropped you on your head when you were a child.
You had to ruin it!
Cheating ruins the story. Shame on you!
Dearest bazzie
Get off your silly rant. The man is right. Funny about rules and catagories, they usually exist for good reason.
They direct writers to areas where they will be most appreciated by their theme. This was clearly out of it's pathetic male humiliation sick whore dress up element.
Fairly well written but rong hole sweetie.
Ruining the Story Line
The introduction of a cuckolding neighbour comes out of nowhere and doesnt even seem to be based on the premise of the original story. " We were both dependent on Frank"?? Unfortunately the additional sub plot creates too much uncertainty. I've gone back and re-read the two stories and remain confused. Disappointing given the good start.
Dearest Anonymous RE: too weak to leave name
Funny thing about the rules and description of this catagory. All it says is stories about adventurous married women and their mates. Unfortunately for your own silly rant this story actually fits that very loose description. You and your fellow freaked out commentors just don't like it so you hide behind this category bullshit.
These categories are not that strict in definition and the moderators do change a story's catagory if they feel it doesn't fit the one selected so if you don't like a story's subject matter just move along. Better yet, start your own website, bring these trolls with you and leave us alone. Leaving comments like some that have been left here is just idiotic.
Did I miss part 2?
I missed the story about Sunday. I loved the two parts I read.
Sunday?
what happen on Sunday? where did frank come in?
A CROCK OF SHIT
THIS IS THE BIGGEST CROCK OF SHIT FOR A STORY THAT I HAVE EVER READ! YOU ARE ONE SICK SOB.
good story
at this point, she doesn't care if her hubby joins? does she care about his feelings? does it matter if he starting to think twice about the situation?
good story
I liked the story. There should have been some preface to explain what has happened the night before, or their relationship. Obviously he is a willing cuckold, but the idea that she went against her husband, in preference to the neighbor, brings a couple things into question.
There should be a follow up story or 2nd chapter here. Does she anticipate always putting other men in front of her husband? Are their kids his? Has she been doing this their entire life together? Is this a neighborhood where others can witness what is going on?
My wife and I tried the cuckold thing, and it didn't work out. He was too much of an asshole. We chose wrong, but didn't matter, never broached that subject again.
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