All Comments on 'Brown Out in the Elevator Ch. 01'

by techsan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Now I never would have thought of this story line.

Fascinating situation handled with proper aplomb by our hero! (Were that I was him!)

Really easy read; was over before I got settled in. Looking forward to the next chapter - this has all kinds of possibilities!

DJ

don87654don87654about 18 years ago
Breeding time?

Perhaps you need to give some of your sperm to Carrie so she can have another baby?

don-donna2don-donna2about 18 years ago
Don87654 is making his standard comment

Guess he has a live sperm fetish

Meanwhile is this version 2,317th or 2,318th version of this story????

LovelyLeoLovelyLeoabout 18 years ago
Techsan, Very nice story

What a great story! and knowing that women who are breatfeeding usually cannot get pregnant is such a great idea to use in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Any ole pussy in a storm

If you can't fuck the one you love, fuck the one you're with !

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Hot!

I really liked this story - not too sure about the fetish and lactating breasts but it was done tastefully (yeah yeah I know the pun) and the sex was very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
:)

Ah? no other natural needs then? except easing the chest pains I mean?? twenty hours huh..Cheers Yoron.

Anonymous
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