All Comments on 'She Tried Some On The Side'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Just another wimp husband story.

Nothing original. The names have been changed.

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 17 years ago
No magic and no story

Complaining about a theme of a story (see previous comment) makes the same sense as complaining in a library that there is a biography section. Choose something else. Choosing a story and not getting one is another matter. Listing your daily activities does not make a story more than a "to do" list does. Is there a conflict? is there any development? You clearly study (studied?) hard to become a good masssage therapist. How about reading something about the essential elements of a story?

huedogghuedoggover 12 years ago
another WACC

1 star says it all

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Just another WACC story

Sluts and WACCs, this is the reason for wood chippers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Why ruin a perfectly good woodchipper?

Nah, just let them rot under the noon days sun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I thought this story was pretty disgusting myself.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionabout 5 years ago
Mmmm

Not a lot to like here, I'm afraid.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Twink

Another cuck husband and whore wife story. So used up in LW.

patilliepatillieover 3 years ago
Jesus what did you do about this?

those students deserved a beating, and the wife should be out on her ass.

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

Ahhhhh another proudly closeted bisexual male living in denial.

kirei8kirei810 months ago

Aint it the truth, iameasel! Come on, magic, fess up!

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