Nothing original. The names have been changed.
Complaining about a theme of a story (see previous comment) makes the same sense as complaining in a library that there is a biography section. Choose something else. Choosing a story and not getting one is another matter. Listing your daily activities does not make a story more than a "to do" list does. Is there a conflict? is there any development? You clearly study (studied?) hard to become a good masssage therapist. How about reading something about the essential elements of a story?
1 star says it all
Sluts and WACCs, this is the reason for wood chippers
Nah, just let them rot under the noon days sun!
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