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The Hits Just Keep on Coming!
That's three winners in a row, Woodchuck. Keep them coming!
Thorough Enjoyment
Very nice pace, great story line development. So many possiblities and I know you will explore them all.
The blank page is starting to show some real color
Although the image is still not clear, it is now obvious that some details are starting to develop. I am looking forward to the next few chapters in this story.
Wowzas
Great story... Hope to see more.
this was great, keep them cumming!!!
really enjoyed it. hope to see more soon!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!
This is a great storyline PLEASE keep on writing it. Character and plot are second to none. Love it.
Thanks,
Joel
I myself am waiting on an ending
1st I'm waiting on an ending I must say the story is great but its hard to wait on an ending. The way I see it, there is so many different ways you can go. Conbining it all together you are going to have fun, also the readers will to. But I ask you to please use the people plus the book but you have great begining. I liked the way you wrote pop out of the story, with the book and reminding him of the heavy responibility using it brings. But he's only started, so whatever I say may be of little help, its just some way to go with a good ending.PS it would be 100 with a good ending.
great story
best story i've read really got me into it hope u finish it cuase i gotta know what happens
Brilliant
Loved the story, hope you write the next chapter soon
Awesome
that was awesome keep on writing more.
Why the rush?
I love your work. I've been reading some of the comments, and truthfully can not understand why your readers are so focused on your taking such a nicely developing tease to it's end. For myself, I hope Nathan's book takes a loong time to fill. I'm interested in how he handles the discovery of his casually concealed treasure, how those who his grandfather led away work into the plot, how the constraints written for him in the Book shape his personality, how strong his friends become when he finds he needs them... In short, I hope you choose to turn this pilot into a whole series of wonderful reading. Please let me know if you do so, I think I would like to collect the series.
Jack
WOW
Wow, what a great, great story. This is one of the best that I have read. Your character development and story line is really, really wonderful. Please keep writing on this story.
Dude!! Finish This!!!
Jeeze!! This is a good story. You haven't written anymore since last year. DUDE!! You gotta finish the story!
great story
one of the best i have ever read on here man you have got to come back to this
GREAT!!!! realy great story
Wonderfuly written, very mature writing style unlike most online erotic fiction available where the story is all sex and no plot "A Blank Page" has layers, character development, intrigue and enough sex scenes to get you turned on but not so much as to destroy what moral compass perverts like me still have. Awesome story can'y wait for the next installment.
More Please
Please continue this story. It is great. I only signed up to keep track of this one.
More Please!
I like the story and hope you can/will finish it.
the best
man that was sooooooooooooooooooooo hot and well written u must continue
BRAVO!!!!!!
While seeming a bit long winded compaired to most of the other stories here, I found myself unable to stop reading. The plot & character building are fantastic, the sign of a top notch writer in the making. Perhaps a bit more detail on the sex scenes & a bit more background on the book. But please, please write more. We can't wait for the next chapters. :)
Awesome
You Definetly have the making of a top notch writer
BOOK IN PRGORESS?
NICE FEEL AND FLOW FOR THE STORY;BEYOND THE SEX ... INTERESTING CHARACTERS,AND NICE CONCEPT.. THE BLANK PAGE IN THE BOOK OF LIFE.. GOOD STORY FOR HARD TIMES ... PEOPLE LIKE THE IDEA ... REMINDS ME A LITTLE OF ..JUMPER A STORY OF REVENGE; THE BOOK NOT THE MOVIE; I THINK YPU GOT THE BIGGINIGS OF A NOVELLA; CAME LOOKING FOR A SEX STORY AND GOT MORE... RARE.. CONGRATULATIONS TO THE AUTHOR.. HOPE YOU FLESH THIS OUT AND MAYBE TRY AND PUBLISH..
Awsome!!!!!
Your Characters are well written and easy to realate to. This is with-out-a-doubt my favorite story. Can't wait for the next installment!
what happened?
I really like this story, are you still here? and are you going to write More?
Need and want more
It's such a shame that this story has been left hanging. There is so much more that could go into it, and I definately hope that the author will eventually finish. Characters and story line are wonderful, and it would be a shame to not see it finished.
Not bad at all for the beginning of the story!!!
Now all we need is the great ending, the sex, mind control and the thought of extra power from a greater source is in deed intriguing ( sorry if spelling is bad) Hope to see it continue in the near future (today 10/18/09)Thanks again
Darrell
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