Nice storyline, but you should have spent more time developing the story.
i like the idea of the story but was a little quick,
while it lasted. Thanks for a nice little fantasy.
whats with the ending? ran out of time?
Hot very hot. But, I would have loved a longer interlude during their first encounter.
Short, sweet! What a lovely story.... Wish you could write more about these two....
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A little too quick...
Nice storyline, but you should have spent more time developing the story.
nice idea
i like the idea of the story but was a little quick,
It was fun...
while it lasted. Thanks for a nice little fantasy.
crappy ending
whats with the ending? ran out of time?
Nice.
Hot very hot. But, I would have loved a longer interlude during their first encounter.
Beautiful
Short, sweet! What a lovely story.... Wish you could write more about these two....
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Back to The Truth or
More submissions by lilywhite31.