My Story Sect. 05

Great storyline!

This is a great storyline. I hope you have the time to write more.

Very nice

the complexity of your work is stunning. you are able to tell a very involving story that is one of the best i have read here. Keep up the good work and know that it does not go unappreciated

Will you finish

writing this story? It's indeed interesting...

This merits moving forward.

There's 58,500 years to fill in with details before Nico slides into bed with Gillie. I can't wait to hear how long it took him to get over hating humans to giving up his virginity, and his experience at making love to his first Neanderthal female, a la, Clan of the Cave Bear. I really want to hear his tale of the social evolution from Neanderthal culture to that of homo sapiens and how he accumulated wealth in light of the continuing social fear of those who have wealth. If he can slip into the bed or even the mouth or backside of an occasional heroine like Cleopatra or Joan of Arc, that will make the story much more interesting.

It's really interesting and creative so far. Please drive on.

Great story

This is a great storyline so far and rather well written. I do hope you eventually continue this story!

The end?

My god man, you.ve made a great start, don't quit on this story. Looking forward to many, many, more chapters in this story... Lars

Editor needed. Good content but incomprehensible run on sentences murder the story.