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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz02/05/06

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The solitude of dry land
Over the turbulence of
Ocean storms of
Emotional involvement.

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by Liar02/05/06

Out...

Who doesn't want out now and then?

"color me beach blond
paint me surf side aqua"

Can't say why exactly, but those lines shine.

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by Maria239402/06/06

I Just love the beach

and every single poem you eeek out of your proximity to the ocean. Good work, spike, enjoyed it more than a full moon on myrtle when the tide is high:)

xoxox

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by Anonymous02/07/06

Count me in

and another wonderful pen from my favorite poet...must be the beach and the beer...ah...tune in drop out...old hippies never die...luv it ..Sand.../blue

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