All Comments on 'The Valentine I Do...'

romance and attention to detail...along with fruit play! very good write!

and chocolate? You decadent little hussy. I loved it. Great job.

Very hot chocolat.

should be classified as a drug...or at least...an Aprhodiasic U go L...blue

The sin of chocolate - so delicious. The only way to top this is for Brad, a dozen or so years hence, to reenact this moment, not on an anniversary, but to pick a day at random and surprise her completely and totally out of the blue.

so hot! i love the slow buildup of the chocolate and champagne....so sensual

Very, very sensual, and erotic. I think I need to go get some strawberries and chocolate.

Good Luck!

and I'm about to make my own sugar fix!

strawberries and pussy, three of the most wonderful things to eat. However, it should have been edited better.

strawberries and pussy: Three of the greatest things to eat. However, it should have been edited better.

can never go wrong. And a fountain? Plus a wedding and champagne and strawberries... You went all out with this one!

Such a romantic story. Makes me crave some chocolate though. LOL

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Great story.. even if it made me crave chocolate... and I'm not sposed to have chocolate.... great job.

Very sweet story. :) Good luck in the contest.

I am a chocolate lover and I can now reflect on this tale while eating ...<grin tantalizing valentine tale, good luck and happy lovers day