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Metamorphosis

bySabina_Tolchovsky©
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by LeBroz02/05/06

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Very nicely done
Evolution of images;
From fingers on skin
To the change of images
With passion's metaphoric perfect storm.

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by My Erotic Trail02/05/06

very nice

I enjoyed your poem

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by Queen of Mars02/05/06

Filled My Mind

Creatively visual, your words filled my mind with an image, which is what good, descriptive poetry should do. Very HOT, dear.

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by Anonymous02/06/06

Still not blinking

I can't look away! Very hot, ST!

Fly

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