work into that one Lit page of erotic words. And you either know a lot about flowers or you did quite a bit of research. Either way, it was a beautiful story and a beautiful tease. Wonderful to read. Thank you.
In addition to being very hot and flawlessly written, it was also informative.
I could almost feel her breath when she whispered in his ear.
Well done.
Aurora:
There are about a dozen writers of erotic literature (seems to be evenly split by gender) whose work I'll read as soon as I note that they've authored something new, and without a question about the subject. I know it'll be well written, it tells a very entertaining story, makes sense, and because of their ability to put words together, I'll be satisfied and feel great after the experience. I also know that a future re-read will pass the test of time. You are in that catagory. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I love the story. The sensuality and texture of the setting combines with the lovemaking to really expand this. It turns a "romp in the back of the store" into something powerful and tantric.
Nice little romance story. Well told and cute twist. I loved her sensuously touching the flowers, it was a nice visual. Would have been nice to see it just a touch longer, but no complaints.
English
Very nice!
Fine story. Thank you!
wow
this is too good
You put a lot of thought and
work into that one Lit page of erotic words. And you either know a lot about flowers or you did quite a bit of research. Either way, it was a beautiful story and a beautiful tease. Wonderful to read. Thank you.
A bouquet of botanical bliss
That was a lot of fun and dang near educational. A nice, original piece of writing, Aurora. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
I took notes
In addition to being very hot and flawlessly written, it was also informative.
I could almost feel her breath when she whispered in his ear.
Well done.
a delight to all the senses.....
as usual, I am blown away by your superb writing!
Another great read
Aurora:
There are about a dozen writers of erotic literature (seems to be evenly split by gender) whose work I'll read as soon as I note that they've authored something new, and without a question about the subject. I know it'll be well written, it tells a very entertaining story, makes sense, and because of their ability to put words together, I'll be satisfied and feel great after the experience. I also know that a future re-read will pass the test of time. You are in that catagory. Thank You. Ronnie W.
A fun tale
That was quite something. I loved the teasing and the way they built up the heat. A well-written little story. Good one.
Wonderful Again, Aurora!
Very nice indeed...
Best of luck in the contest
You are so gifted!!
Very Sensual
Lovely piece...I loved reference to the different flowers. Even cowboys can appreciate flowers. This story was refreshing change from the normal fare.
Good Luck!
Very good
Better than a tiptoe through the tulips!
Boyd
Hot as a greenhouse
What an exciting and delightful story. It's vivid portrayal of sensuality is well done. Thank you
Hugo
Moist
I love the story. The sensuality and texture of the setting combines with the lovemaking to really expand this. It turns a "romp in the back of the store" into something powerful and tantric.
Woof!
Very hot and sensual.
Loved the imagery of the various flowers and how she used them to tease her lover.
Well done.
Oh my...
It just got very warm in here. :) This is an incredible story. Good luck in the contest!
An interesting
story, hot and wet. I liked the role-playing between Chris and Bella.
Nice work!
Well written and hot. Good luck in the contest, and Happy Valentine's Day! ~Imp
Needed more Lilies.
But I'll give you the 5 anyway.
Minor punctuation errors in the dialogue, no detriment to a nice little read.
Thank you.
kb
Hot little read....
ok, my dear, you have me wearing wet panties. Must go change. i loved it. thanks for the hot times.
Very goood
The little plot twists sometimes make a huge difference, Fantastic!! ~Quinn71~
Nice.
Say it with flowers. :) - AN (AchtungNight, I can't remember my password.)
Lovely
Nice little romance story. Well told and cute twist. I loved her sensuously touching the flowers, it was a nice visual. Would have been nice to see it just a touch longer, but no complaints.
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