by kurlykayaker23
The first aproach is not only driven by feeling, its also as natural as breathing. Written in a stile that is as easy to read as it is entertaining.
Jan
Nicely flowing story, excellent use of dialogue. Really well done for a first time Writer.
Great story, can't wait for next part. I love when someone takes time to setup a story. Well done!
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