All Comments on 'Excellent Timing'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
The search for recognition

The first aproach is not only driven by feeling, its also as natural as breathing. Written in a stile that is as easy to read as it is entertaining.

Jan

duddle146duddle146about 18 years ago
Lovely Story

Nicely flowing story, excellent use of dialogue. Really well done for a first time Writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great beginning

Great story, can't wait for next part. I love when someone takes time to setup a story. Well done!

ldix11@hotmail.com

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