Rather than go back to the Dr. he appoints his subordinate to continue fucking his wife. Soon he will be pimping her out to others with gangbangs in the offing.
Where is the erotic and sensual. By your hand, this is just a sick woman who has a husband who likes to watch and be humiliated by your own hand. Where is the point of interest?
When I read through the story I didn't get the feeling that the husband enjoyed this new twist in events. And, yes, there were probably other options, but going back to the doctor wouldn't have necessarily been the solution -- then she loses that part of herself that is important; the ability to connect with her husband through sex. It's just as important to him; he loves her.
He was in a tricky situation and had to find a solution. While I don't know if I would agree with the solution, it was his choice; no one else's. End of story.
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Anonymous02/11/06
I don't get it...
they were married 32 years. Even if she wants to fuck all the time she has dildos and other aids. The idea that after one fuck with a stranger she tells her husband of 32 years that she will fuck others regardless of his feelings make no sense. This is her choice not due to the drugs.
Since he is scared of STDs his solution is to get his buddies to fuck her? What if his buddies get a STD then he would be bringing it into his bed. So he is going to bring the camper to the company parking lot and pimp her out to co-workers? Since they are most likely in their 50s when he retires do they move their activities to retirement homes and nursing homes?
Basically, the problem with cuckold stories is that they are light BSDM. If the wife wants other partners ok but there is no reason for the husband to play the fool and restrict his choices. In this story, the husband ends up spending his free time pimping for his wife and it is implied that he will fuck only her.
JPB, you are an excellent writer and I would score the writing 100% but the story content is -50%.
I'm not saying he should have kicked her to the curb but to pimp her out to his friend was just wrong. What he should have done was take her back to the doctor to have her hormones adjusted. I do know that they come in varied strengths and that this dose could be strong enough to give her cancer as well...
The husband started out very strong, confident, manly and finished a cuckold wimp letting his wife screw another. That's just not funny anymore.
Developer
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Anonymous02/11/06
Us take you seriously? NOT!
Since you obviously don't intend for anyone to take your writings seriously, I'll just make one comment: Rediculous rubbish.
It sounds like he put her on "whore-moans" instead of hormones. I didn't read in those long side-effect statements about a woman becoming completely unglued and not having any self-control when taking them. Maybe it's just the basic excuse to cheat.
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Anonymous02/12/06
Good story
Not your usual, but very enjoyable. Short but very well written. A little bit of an O'henry twist at the end. I'll bet you had fun writing this one.
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Anonymous06/12/07
I should have Known
Haveing been reading JPB stories for some time,I have alwats wondered if he had always written stories that never finishes and where the husband was made out to be a wimp,stupid,and an all round ass hole.Well his first was a piece of shit and he has just gone down hill from there.
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Anonymous01/19/09
Get a life
Get a life folks. It's just a story and yes a pretty good one.
English
I Don't See The Point
Rather than go back to the Dr. he appoints his subordinate to continue fucking his wife. Soon he will be pimping her out to others with gangbangs in the offing.
Where is the erotic and sensual. By your hand, this is just a sick woman who has a husband who likes to watch and be humiliated by your own hand. Where is the point of interest?
I don't think that's quite correct
When I read through the story I didn't get the feeling that the husband enjoyed this new twist in events. And, yes, there were probably other options, but going back to the doctor wouldn't have necessarily been the solution -- then she loses that part of herself that is important; the ability to connect with her husband through sex. It's just as important to him; he loves her.
He was in a tricky situation and had to find a solution. While I don't know if I would agree with the solution, it was his choice; no one else's. End of story.
I don't get it...
they were married 32 years. Even if she wants to fuck all the time she has dildos and other aids. The idea that after one fuck with a stranger she tells her husband of 32 years that she will fuck others regardless of his feelings make no sense. This is her choice not due to the drugs.
Since he is scared of STDs his solution is to get his buddies to fuck her? What if his buddies get a STD then he would be bringing it into his bed. So he is going to bring the camper to the company parking lot and pimp her out to co-workers? Since they are most likely in their 50s when he retires do they move their activities to retirement homes and nursing homes?
Basically, the problem with cuckold stories is that they are light BSDM. If the wife wants other partners ok but there is no reason for the husband to play the fool and restrict his choices. In this story, the husband ends up spending his free time pimping for his wife and it is implied that he will fuck only her.
JPB, you are an excellent writer and I would score the writing 100% but the story content is -50%.
SleeplessinMD
But the husband should have ended it...
I'm not saying he should have kicked her to the curb but to pimp her out to his friend was just wrong. What he should have done was take her back to the doctor to have her hormones adjusted. I do know that they come in varied strengths and that this dose could be strong enough to give her cancer as well...
The husband started out very strong, confident, manly and finished a cuckold wimp letting his wife screw another. That's just not funny anymore.
Developer
Us take you seriously? NOT!
Since you obviously don't intend for anyone to take your writings seriously, I'll just make one comment: Rediculous rubbish.
Did the doctor put her on the wrong pills?
It sounds like he put her on "whore-moans" instead of hormones. I didn't read in those long side-effect statements about a woman becoming completely unglued and not having any self-control when taking them. Maybe it's just the basic excuse to cheat.
Good story
Not your usual, but very enjoyable. Short but very well written. A little bit of an O'henry twist at the end. I'll bet you had fun writing this one.
I should have Known
Haveing been reading JPB stories for some time,I have alwats wondered if he had always written stories that never finishes and where the husband was made out to be a wimp,stupid,and an all round ass hole.Well his first was a piece of shit and he has just gone down hill from there.
Get a life
Get a life folks. It's just a story and yes a pretty good one.
Gave it what it was worth of
Nothing, you either hate JPB or you love him
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