All Comments on 'Family Reunion'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Thank you for your story!

I enjoyed this story. It is very believable and reminds me of my first time.

We tend to forget how soft the act, how tender the situation was, and how unsure we were of ourselves, when it first happened.

Some one with just a bit more experience than ours led us in to the world God intended us to enjoy.

Thank you for telling your story like this!

I hope the cousins find (found) room to explore more with each other as they mature(d).

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hate it

i love storys were guys cum inside the girls they fuck thats how i cum myself i didnt feel any weatness from my pussy at all if i was her id say squirt in me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Terrible grammar killed it

Fix your grammar and your sentence structure. The mood is absolutely ruined when I read poor English.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
so-so

it could have been good if it had more background and another chapter or two of course a GOOD EDITOR would have been nice also.

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