Very lovely story. Can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out who she really is. Hope you're able to update soon.
Well-written, nice details, sweet story. Good luck in the contest!
No! no no no... you can't leave me hanging like that. It's just not fair! I really loved everything I read and I hope that you continue it soon.
There needs to be a chapter 2, I really liked this!!!
OMG.......you have got to write a 2nd chapter.....at the very least finish the night......please!!!!!!
will look forward to the next installment......
I agree with the other comments. Can't wait for chapter 2.
I'm sitting here searching like a mad woman for part 2! I was hoping at the end he would call her by real name... Argh!! Gimme more! Great job!
This story was sooo good, please write a 2nd chapter, I'll be looking for it.
please give us more.
my mnd is making up the rest WOW
Best thing i have read in a LONG time, You HAVE to make a chapter 2, it just wouldn't be fair if you didn't...
This is too good a story line to let it die so soon. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Nice start. He has no recollection of her? Did he ever give her his last name? Hmmm....
The introspection and passion....well done! Looking forward to reading on.
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absolutely loved it
Very lovely story. Can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out who she really is. Hope you're able to update soon.
Sexy and romantic.
Well-written, nice details, sweet story.
Good luck in the contest!
aaahh!!
No! no no no... you can't leave me hanging like that. It's just not fair! I really loved everything I read and I hope that you continue it soon.
Chapter 2???!!!
There needs to be a chapter 2, I really liked this!!!
MORE!!!!!!! SOON!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
OMG.......you have got to write a 2nd chapter.....at the very least finish the night......please!!!!!!
talk about cliffhangers....
will look forward to the next installment......
Wonderful romantic start
I agree with the other comments. Can't wait for chapter 2.
What!
I'm sitting here searching like a mad woman for part 2! I was hoping at the end he would call her by real name... Argh!! Gimme more! Great job!
Please Continue
This story was sooo good, please write a 2nd chapter, I'll be looking for it.
I want more!
please give us more.
good foundation
my mnd is making up the rest WOW
Where is Chapter 2??
Best thing i have read in a LONG time, You HAVE to make a chapter 2, it just wouldn't be fair if you didn't...
Have to echo the others
This is too good a story line to let it die so soon. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Nice start. He has no recollection of her? Did he ever give her his last name? Hmmm....
Realy good read!
The introspection and passion....well done! Looking forward to reading on.
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